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The current exam system is the best and the better is not found yet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#exam #system
It
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It's
 true that the
exam
system
 we currently have is better and offers many conveniences for both applicants and students.
However I
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However, I
 disagree with the idea that it is the best ever had
exam
system
. On the one hand, we are
acknowledged
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acknowledging
 that Uzbekistan used to be the part of
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union
, so our parents and grandparents lived during that period and usually tell us about
pros
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the pros
 and cons of
this
 union When it comes to
exam
system
,
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,
 in 1950 s or 60s people used to take an
exam
 for entering university lively
.
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.
So what does it mean? Applicants go the university building and choose the cue card and answer the questions
on
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about
 it orally.
This
 type of
exam
 seems to be a true reflection of
individual's knowledge
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an individual's knowledge
the individual's knowledge
 in comparison with
test
system
 that we have currently.
For example
, people usually try to cheat
inviligetor
 and pass exams without difficulties of hard work, so you may guess that the
test
system
 seems to be a perfect opportunity for cheating.
On the other hand
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 can not say that it is totally useless
,
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,
 because tests have
also
 some advantages
.
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.
First
 of all
,
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,
may be during the period of Soviet
union
the United States (especially the northern states during the American Civil War)
Union
 the number of applicants was lower than we have today
.
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.
It means that the knowledge of applicants was checked without worrying about other people waiting for
exam
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the exam
exams
an exam
.
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.
However
,
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,
 today the density of population in our
cauntry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
 is twice the number in
last century
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the last century
. So it is better for assessment purposes and requires less time
.
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.
Secondly
 the number of questions is bigger so it requires from
test
 takers a good skill of time management. In conclusion
,
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,
although
 the
test
system
 offers many plus points I would not say that it is the best ever had
system
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a system
 because of reasons provided above.
Submitted by Sevara on

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