some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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Nowadays, each country has some rules and punishments in a society, and sometimes, there is a specific
punishment
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for each individual when making illegal things in the country as well as the
community
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. Some people think that there should be a specific
punishment
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the members in the
community
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, while others believe that looking at the encouragement of a person is more essential when punish the person. In
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essay, I am going to discuss both sides and give my personal opinion. There are 2 main points of why people think there should be a specific
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for people when making illegal behaviour for some reasons.
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firstly
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, people must determine how they are going to punish before they do the
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, as a consequence they might stop doing these illegal behaviours.
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, if someone wants to steal a money, if they know they retribution they might not do
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lawlessness.
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, all the
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members are affecting each other, so they much have enough knowledge about the way they will punish.
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, the society will absolutely have less circumstance.
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, there are
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2 points of why people believe there should be looking for the appearance encouragement when choosing the
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. The
first
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reason is, each
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person has
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a feeling and emotion, so as a human we have limit feeling of the patient.
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, some people might have a
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that can cause a psychological problem which motivate person have
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problem throw his life.
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, in our
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, there are some people who do more
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and other might do only one
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, so there are not in a same level, the once who make less
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is means he has the opportunity to stop doing
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behaviour, while others not. In conclusion, I strongly believe that, the country should be taking an account to people’s psychological more than anything, because it’s the main necessary thing that we have and can build a better human. I recommend all the countries, to look at the motivation of each personal before implement the
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.
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