When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It cannot be denied that nowadays technology is completely helpful to ease what people do in their daily activities so that some of the society believes that they do not need traditional skills and ways of

life

any

further

. I consider that I completely disagree with the view that keeping traditional skills and ways of

life

is pointless.

First

of all, traditional skills are useful to keep ourselves independent. Long time

ago before

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ago, before

technology is invented by the scientist, our ancestors survived by practicing old ways of

life

such

as cooking with firewood.

This

practical skill is still feasible to do in

certain area

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certain areas

a certain area

like rural or remote villages

that is

lack of accessibility to electricity or new technologies. In these areas, it is difficult to find a new type of electric

stove but

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stove, but

people still can live and eat well. It proofed that traditional skills are important to make people live independently.

Secondly

, traditional skills are medium to learn about

life

values that cannot be learnt by using technology. In examples, I

used

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have used

to washing my own clothes without washing machines since childhood.

This

activity taught me to focus on to do

such

thing and remind me how to treat my own things properly. Recently, I

do not get

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have not gotten

have not got

these feelings when I use washing machine. In conclusion, technologies

is

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are

a good way to help people finishing their work

quickly but

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quickly, but

traditional skills are

also

worth to

learnt

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learn

because we need them to save our

life

in a limited situations.