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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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Recently many
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Recently, many
 people
accept
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have accepted
 to do extreme activities, the ones have many risks
for
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in
 their
life
 and they might lose their
life
 in their way. There are many activities like
this
such
 as mountain climbing, hang-gliding, zip-lining, and skiing in high mountains. Sometimes these people go to places no one ever gone there. When these people are interviewed and they
are asked
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ask
 about the reason they are so interested in these activities, they answer that they really enjoy doing in spite of the difficulties the face with. Most of them have a big goal that they try their best to achieve like reaching to the peak of Everest. They do many
exercise
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exercises
 and even spend a lot of time and money to achieve that.
In addition
 to the joy of reaching their purpose they enjoy passing the way to the final destination. According to their view,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 reason they do these risky activities are the extreme excitement they feel while doing them and the discharge of adrenaline in their body and
also
 the feeling of confidence after
successful
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successfully
 passing the trend and reaching the desirable level. In my opinion, nothing is better than having a goal in
life
 and try and fight to achieve that. I think
for
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of
 these people the quality of
life
 matters more than
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 quantity. They rather to do what they like even risky in their
life
 and they don't care that maybe they lose their lives. They are ready to risk their lives to live the
life
 they like rather living for a long time without risking their lives and dreaming about their wishes for the rest of the
life
 without any attempt to make them real.
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