Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, due to the burgeoning population, crime rate
have spiked
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has spiked
over the time. It
becomes
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has become
a threatening issue for the whole world today. As per the rules of
The great
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Greater
britain
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
and
Austrailia
a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia
, the Lawyers cannot access the criminals previous
record
, which covers the
person
from being punished. Certain solicitors have
conjecture
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conjectured
that they should be provided with all the evidences of yesteryear.
However
, I completely agree with the given statement, due to various reasons. My agreement would be justified in the subsequent paragraphs. It is irrefutable that a
person
held accused after complete scrutiny of the provided evidences. But in some countries, the jury
do not have
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does not have
an access to the criminal previous
record
.
Although
, they have proofs related to the current heinous act of the defendant,
however for
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however, for
proper understanding related to the
person
, the law agencies should furnish
previous history
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a previous history
of an individual for better judgement.
Moreover
, the government should keep the former
record
of every
person
, it would help law enforcement agencies to keep an eye on a
person
who is involved in wicked activities and refrain them
by
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from
doing any heinous act. For illustration, the Pakistani government kept all the
record
of Kalbhushan Yadav and when the case went to the international courts, they furnished all the previous criminal
record
of him that strengthen the case against him. In order to recapitulate the topic, it can be said that it is very much imperative for the decision makers to have an access
of
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to
all the previous records of the criminals before drafting any decision of the case.
Submitted by MUHAMMAD MOEIZ AZAM on

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