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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

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Almost everybody has a mobile
phone
. But it’s a great invention? I think there are both advantage and disadvantage.
Firstly
, we will discuss about its advantages. It’s cheap and convenient for us to use. We can use mobile
phone
 with 4G of Wifi to keep in touch with anyone we want without spending too much money. We can call video, send messages or email to friends or colleagues wherever they live.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, it’s quite small so we can easily take it everywhere that we want.
However
, it
also
 has some disadvantages. If we overuse mobile
phone
, it will cause a lot of serious illness
such
 as: headache, stress or depression. It
also
 distracts students from their study,
instead
 of doing homeworks they use mobile
phone
 to play games or chat with friends. In conclusion, I think every
inention
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
intention
invention
 has its advantages and disadvantages.
Therefore
, we should take
advangtage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
 of its benefits and avoid its drawbacks.
Submitted by Ngo Thi Nhu Y on

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