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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The pictures given illustrate the production of
tea
 and how a
cup
 of
tea
 is made.
Overall
, there are 18 steps from growing
tea
 in India and China to enjoying a
cup
 of
tea
, but
this
 process is quite simple. In the first stage of producing
tea
,
tea
 seeds are sown and
then
 the seeds grow into plants under the optimum sunshine. After the plants have grown sufficiently, these tender
tea
 leaves are collected in baskets and
spreaded
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spread
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 out under the sun to become dried.
Then
, these dried leaves are packed into boxes in order to transport and deliver to every
shops
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shop
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 or
supermarkets
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supermarket
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 where the customers can buy the
tea
 packs from. Turning
into
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to
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 the method of preparing a
cup
 of
tea
,
the first step is
 that you need to buy a pack of
tea
 and take it to your home. After that, you fill the kettle with just
sufficient
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a sufficient
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 amount of water and boil it.
This
 boiled water is
then
 transferred to a
cup
 with a
tea
 bag inside. After waiting for 2-3 minutes, you can remove the
tea
 bag and be ready for
this
cup
 of
tea
. Especially, for those who prefer
the
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apply
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sweetness, can add milk or sugar to enjoy your
tea
. In order to enjoy your best
cup
 of
tea
, you should
persevering
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persevere
be persevering
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 in making a nice one for yourself after a couple of
hard-working
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hard working
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day
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days
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.
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