Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older. Do you agree or disagree?

Earth is a beautiful living planet in the universe and the common habitat of more than 7 million human population and millions of species of biodiversity.
However
, humans do not appreciate it,
on the contrary
, they are demolishing Mother Earth in a terrible way.
For example
, deforestation.  The forests are shrinking or disappearing daily, especially tropical rainforests.  With the current deforestation momentum, scientists estimate that in the
next
100 years, the entire forest on earth will disappear.  Loss of forests as well as the loss of lungs;  there are no more green trees to transport and absorb greenhouse gases.  Not having forests
also
means losing barriers and protecting fences, leading to increasingly serious erosion and flooding.   Another example of demolishing Mother Earth is coal and mineral mining activities.  Coal is an abundant source of energy, but with the generation of electricity from coal, huge amounts of carbon dioxide are destroying the atmosphere.  
As a result
, climate change is becoming more complex globally..
On the other hand
, the process of population growth is increasing, the problem is that without exploiting the natural resources, people will quickly fall into a shortage of food and insufficient supply for needs.
Therefore
, everyone needs to
skillfully
exploit those resources by making long-term plans, how to make humans and nature coexist peacefully and develop together. The earth is increasingly being destroyed by humans, so we need to protect it.
protecting
Suggestion
Protecting
the earth is protecting our own environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial responsibility
  • independence
  • financial literacy
  • work ethic
  • effort and reward
  • impulsive purchases
  • budgeting skills
  • critical thinking
  • sense of entitlement
  • modest amounts
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