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Most people believe that stress is always harmful to health while some now think that stress has some positive values to us. What’s your opinion on this?

Stress
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 is a very common problem being faced today. Life is full of deadlines, frustrations, and demands, so every individual
will experience
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experienced
stress
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 in one or the other
time
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. Typically
stress
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 is seen as having a negative impact on individuals.
Stress
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 can have both positive or toxic impacts on a person. But there are not many people aware of making the distinction between negative
stress
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 and positive
stress
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. - I see what you’ve said. Negative
stress
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 is something about all the bad effects of
stress
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 to people, right? Like
stress
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 makes you sick,
stress
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 is overwhelming,
stress
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 creates negative effects, and you should avoid it.
Stress
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 can
also
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 lead to emotional problems, depression, panic attacks, or other forms of anxiety and worry. - If you're constantly under
stress
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, you can have physical symptoms,
such
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 as headaches, an upset stomach, high blood pressure, chest pain, and problems with sleep.
On the other hand
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,
stress
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 over a longer period of
time
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, say, if a loved one falls ill or if financial hardship sets in, is an entirely different beast. Long-term
stress
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 can cause you to suffer from insomnia, have trouble focusing, or become depressed or even seriously ill. - What do you think positive
stress
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 means? -Maybe I define it as a good
stress
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.
For
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example you
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example, you
 have a test coming up you know you have to study for it so you take the
time
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 out of your day to prepare you for it. Having the skills to manage and cope with
stress
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 effectively will help the
stress
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 to have the most positive influence on a person. Yes, positive can motivate
everyone if
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everyone, if
 you know you are in the case and you want to cope with it. Going to the doctor, doing exercises or doing the meditation, and performing the best you can at work are all good examples of positive
stress
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. - Do you think you can deal with your
stress
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 when you are under
stress
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? -I think I’m not good at
this
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.
However
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, whenever I know that I’m stressed I try to remind myself to stay calm and spend
time
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 for myself to refresh my all body’s
health
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, I mean mental
health
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 and physical
health
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. - You should do that. Don’t let yourself fall into a decline,
then
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 it leads to a lot of knotty problems.
Instead
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, try shifting your mindset around
stress
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 to the following: Experiencing
stress
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 enhances my performance and productivity. Experiencing
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stress improves
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stress, improves
 my
health
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 and vitality and facilitates my learning and growth. The effects of
stress
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 are positive and should be utilized.
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Munity
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