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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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Recycling helps to protect the environment. Recycling reduces the need for extracting, refining and processing raw materials all of which create air and water pollution. As recycling saves energy, it reduces greenhouse gas emissions, which helps to tackle climate change. Some people think children should be taught at school whereas others believe it should be taught at home. In
this
 essay, the benefits of both will be discussed. I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny.
To begin
, it is always the best to learn with children of the same ages as it increases the understanding, Co-ordination by working hand in hand with people in
this
 area of expertise. The experts and peers can help and guide not only theoretically but
also
 practically
such
 as providing information through leaflets, information handouts, website. In
this
 regard, teaching children at home in early stage will be easy, but as the child grows, it is essential of understanding the needs of recycling and avoid waste.
This
 important needs help from external factors like schools, government emphasising on the protection of the environment. For working parents
,
Accept space
,
It is not always possible for the team to exegesis on each and every step of the process of recycling to children of different ages in the family.
Hence
, in my perspective of view, parents can only encourage the child/children in
this
 context if they were given good knowledge in school.
On the other hand
, there are some parents who not even aware of
this
 idea of recycling, educating the children will help to change
.
Accept space
.
 To conclude, I would recommend to combine both the methods for effective and producing results to achieve the conservation of energy and natural resources, thereby helps the environment to reduce pollution, global warming and waste items from the mother-earth.
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