TASK: More and more parents allow their children to play on computers as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that

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games are becoming more common and are increasingly enjoyed by kids. While some advocate the idea of

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the beneficial effects

of gaming, others argue that all screen-based time is detrimental to children. In my opinion, notwithstanding some possible

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drawbacks, advantages of

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tendency overweight the disadvantages, as gaming can develop

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skills and

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improve brain flexibility whereas the potential connection between aggression and

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games has not been proved. It is a fact that computer games are teaching

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children

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how to work with a different sort of

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. The wide range of actions is required to succeed in a game and while playing kids are being taught primary

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education.

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, not only is gaming improving computer skills, but

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can make offsprings think more flexibly. According to the latest research, electronic games

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ability to adapt and switch between tasks, and think about multiple ideas at a given time to solve problems.

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,

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study proved that kids are becoming quicker, more precise, and more attentive with the help of virtual reality.

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even if some brain functions are improved, there are still broad issues about

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. There is a common belief that

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games increase the likelihood that young people will resort to

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. It is considered that the content of some games does affect

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the social outcome

. The prime example can be the games that are based on shooting as they may provoke aggressive behaviour. But, there

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no meta studies that found proof of any connection between

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games and violent crime. Whether or not someone is likely to become violent is mostly determined by other factors

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as domestic

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or the consumption of alcohol or drugs. In conclusion,

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games are having

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a positive impact

on the lives of 21st century children as they are helping to

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support and strengthen

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child’s brain activity and

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can be used as a teaching tool for

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basis.

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issue is totally

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the disadvantages

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as becoming more violent because of gaming which is not scientifically proved