The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied process diagram depicts how the wave-energy
machine
works and where it is located. As
an
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overall
,
engine
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the engine
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is working with the help of the
waves
on the seashore. The design of
this
wave-energy
machine
has two chambers that are one chamber is related to the
waves
,
another
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and another
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one
with
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turbines and
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a generator
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generator
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.
Initially
, the process commences from the
waves
and the water levels
increases
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.
On
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the bottom
chamber
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air gathers and flows through the turbine.
At
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the
last
stage.
While
turbines rotate the energy generates
from
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electricity
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the electricity
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generator.
Furthermore
, the location of the
wave - energy
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wave-energy
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apparatus is determined by wave power. There are 2 locations for setting up
this
machine
. . If from the coastline,
then
larger
waves
and more power
produced
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are produced
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as well as
higher cost
needed
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are needed
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to construct.
Otherwise
, nearer the
machine
located from the coastline, that will make small
waves
and cheaper to build even though electrical power would
smaller
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be smaller
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to produce.
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