The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied process diagram depicts how the wave-energy
machine
works and where it is located. As an
Correct article usage
apply
overall
, engine
is working with the help of the Add an article
the engine
waves
on the seashore.
The design of this
wave-energy machine
has two chambers that are one chamber is related to the waves
, another
one Correct word choice
and another
with
turbines and Add a missing verb
is with
Correct article usage
a generator
generator
. Fix the agreement mistake
generators
Initially
, the process commences from the waves
and the water levels increases
. Correct subject-verb agreement
increase
On
the bottom Change preposition
In
chamber
air gathers and flows through the turbine. Add a comma
,chamber
At
the Change preposition
In
last
stage. While
turbines rotate the energy generates from
Change preposition
by
electricity
generator.
Add an article
the electricity
Furthermore
, the location of the wave - energy
apparatus is determined by wave power. There are 2 locations for setting up Correct your spelling
wave-energy
this
machine
. . If from the coastline, then
larger waves
and more power produced
Add a missing verb
are produced
as well as
higher cost needed
to construct. Add a missing verb
are needed
Otherwise
, nearer the machine
located from the coastline, that will make small waves
and cheaper to build even though electrical power would smaller
to produce.Add a missing verb
be smaller
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 7 times.
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