Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those relate to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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a group
people
’s opinion tourists ought to respect local
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the local
cultures
and rituals ofCorrect article usage
the
people
, however
, are in
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and believe tourist destinations should accept various Fix the agreement mistake
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cultures
. In my opinion, local culture and rituals should be followed by visitors
, preserve both national culture and identity for next
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Two important factors that visitors
should consider are local customs and behavior so as to avoid cultural clashes
and so do I .there are so many specific rituals in some countries have been followed by their dwellers for several years. So tourists should try to respect local cultures
in order to prevent some issues that might ruin their trips completely. For instance
in Islamic countries wearing Hijab is an inseparable part of the
women’s life, so if females want to go to these countries as a tourist might be better to wear Hijab in the same way to avoid cultural Correct article usage
apply
clashes
, further
following the local customs not only does preserve national identity but it also
leads to transfer these pure cultures
to next generation and save them for a long time on the other hand
welcoming cultural difference with open arms attracts visitors
across the world . indeed there is a positive correlation between numbers of tourists and revenue which are earned by local people
, so more income provides people
with better social status , furthermore
local populace become familiar with various cultures
and have this
chance to broaden their horizon and pick up positive aspects of tourists’ behaviors
in order to tackle their issues in tough circumstance and turn into those happy Change the spelling
behaviours
people
who always have positive
approach to life and climb the ladder of success in succession In conclusion, Add an article
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while
people
enjoy different opinions, personally I think visitors
ought to respect local cultures
and behaviors
in order to prevent cultural Change the spelling
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might spoil their trips completelyAdd the comma(s)
, on the other hand,
on the other hand
preserve local cultures
for next generationSubmitted by shadi sharifzadeh on
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
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