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Que-In recent years more and more people are choosing to read E books rather than paper books.Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

#que-in #years #people #e #books #paper
Now a days it
is often believe
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is often believed
 by many people reading by E-books
is
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are
 very convenient with respect to
paper book
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paper books
.In my opinion merits
supecede
take the place or move into the position of
supersede
surpassed
 the demerits.
Firstly
, In recent times people are very much encouraging the use of technology which are easy to use and
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 course user friendly, same as in term of E-books are
ecofriendly
 and required
minumum
the least possible
minimum
 space. Thousands of books
can be accommodate
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can accommodate
 within a small
pendrive
,
In contrast
 same amount of books required large space to
placed
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place
 the
paper
 books.E-books does not hamper the environment because no trees are
cuts
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cut
 to make the E-
books whereas
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books, whereas
 lots of trees are
cutting
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cut
 due to
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
 of
paper
 books
,
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,
the results of
this
 cause
envionment
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environmental
environment
 pollution in many ways
for instance
 land
errosion
(geology) the mechanical process of wearing or grinding something down (as by particles washing over it)
erosion
 and air pollution.
Secondly
, In fractions of
seconds we
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seconds, we
 can downloads as many books as we want
,
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,
as and when we order
paper
 books online it
take
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takes
lot
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a lot
 of time to
deliverd
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
 and there is lots of chances of damaging of
paper
 books during transportation
.
Accept space
.
E-books we can carry easily with us during our daily routine and our daily
trasportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
 where as
paper
 books are very difficult to manage.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, I found that reading longer time of E-books can cause eye strain due to computers, tablets and mobiles screen as compared to
paper
 books, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
 found that it is
negeligible
so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
 because protective glasses and screens are available in the market by which radiation from the screen become
negilible
so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
. To conclude, in
morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
 era reading by E-books are very much
compfortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
then
 to
paper
 books, but we have
assure
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assured
 that we read it by using protective screens.
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