Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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information
about famous personalities including ones from movies, daily soaps or music and art industries. Media people and photographers are always snooping around the houses, gyms or vacation spots where these celebrities keep travelling. Journalists are always on the hunt for juicy content from celebrities and clicking them anywhere and everywhere they spot them. Use synonyms
For instance
, paparazzi don't even spare these celebrities on their private vacation trips or trying to snap their airport looks and publishing the Linking Words
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information
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papparazi
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paparazzi
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