Some people think that wild animals should not kept in zoos. Other believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The issue of

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whether e

zoos oughted to be existed or not has been widely debated because some people claim that

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

are simply to provide entertainment, and therefor it is

unecessary

absolutely essential

necessary

unnecessary

to put animals in a

captivaty

.

However

, there are many beneficial reasons

interms

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in terms

of

educaiton

the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill

education

educating

and conservation value as I will discuss both side view and my own opinion . Over the past few decades, enormous

founding

financial resources provided to make some project possible

funding

and

time

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the time

to has been spent on

rescueing

systematic investigation to establish facts

researching

rescuing

endanger

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endangered

animals. That's due to the destruction of habit and climate change

cuase

give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally

cause

,

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,

many animals unable to survive.

For example

, cheetahs are

reintroducted

introduce anew

reintroduced

from Howletts Wild Animal Park

sucessfully

with success; in a successful manner

successfully

since they are listed as

vulnerable species

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a vulnerable species

.

As a result

, If we don't have captivity where wild animals can be

breed

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bred

, these species will eventually go extinct.

Furthermore

, another

reason having

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reason, having

a zoo is that

its

the thing named or in question

it

provide

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provides

education

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educational

value, which making

people

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peoples'

peoples

awareness the issue of

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

. To illustrate, Before zoos were being built, people did not know the

important

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importance

of

wild lifes

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wild lives

wildlifes

wild life

and

therefore

, many wild animals were killed and leading to endanger.

Nowadays howeve

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Nowadays, however

Nowadays however

, scientist and

zoologisit

a specialist in the branch of biology dealing with animals

zoologist

are striving for

reaserch

systematic investigation to establish facts

research

researched

in order to provide a

sutible

meant or adapted for an occasion or use

suitable

environment let them to

survie

continue to live through hardship or adversity

survive

serve

save

.

Consquently

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Consequently

, people would

appreciated

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appreciate

and preserver these fauna. Yet,

opponet

a contestant that you are matched against

opponent

claim that

human

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the human

a human

have

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has

no moral right to let animals suffer from captivity just because mankind curious about them. That's the fact due to that zoos are cluttered with

unthreatened

not given medical care or treatment

untreated

species and put there purely to entertain the public

,

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,

for instance

otters can be seen at zoos in many

part

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parts

of the world and. Because of

this

, people said that it is

uncessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

to construct zoos and put animals in there for entertaining. In

additiion

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

additions

, another reason is that television or the internet

are

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is

much better resoures

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a much better resource

much better resource

much better resources

much the best resoures

for understanding animals than

zoo

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a zoo

the zoo

. A case

of

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in

point, watching

nature documentary

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a nature documentary

nature documentaries

will even get more knowledge from seeing animals in zoos. Ultimately, people might rather

to study

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study

on the internet rather than visiting in zoos. In conclusion, I'm convinced that a zoo is

play

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playing

played

plays

a crucial role in

terns

status with respect to the relations between people or groups

terms

of reintroduced endanger

spcieces

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

, because it is not only can provide the conservation program but

also

irreplaceble

impossible to replace

irreplaceable

replaceable

.

Therefore

, provided a

balacne

a state of equilibrium

balance

flora and

founa

all the animal life in a particular region or period

fauna

on ecosystem, our planet will be

more diversity

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more diverse

.