Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many

way

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ways

that parents

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

their

children

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children, for

for

example

, to allow them to make their own

decision

in everything but some parent said they can choose what is best for their offspring. In

this

essay I will

discuss in both

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discuss both

point

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points

of view. In these

day

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days

, it is more freedom. People can make

decision

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decisions

the decision

a decision

by themselves without judging by

another including

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another, including

with a

children

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child

. Some parents could allow them to choose things by

themselves

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themselves, for

for

example

toys, clothes and entertainment etc.

to

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To

practice their offspring to make their own

decision

faster as well as practice to grow up as an adult so they can stand by their own legs in one day when they grow up.

This

practical make them to know exactly what they want.

On the other hand

, parents who taught their children in the wrong

way

can cause many problems. A few parent who

do not know

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does not know

how to demonstrate and give them

example can

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example, can

lead them to self-

centered

being or placed in the center

centred

as well as to be an aggressive

children

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child

. These may have problems that are

difficulty

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difficult

to solve

in

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on

a future.

However

, in case some parents are

thought

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thinking

that to offer them the best is a decent

way

to raise them in

this

huge community and forced them hardly. Parents can suggest what

well

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good

or bad either can or cannot.

In addition

show them

example

satisfying them to believe

these

denotes a person or thing

this

is a well virtuous, high

principle but

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principle, but

the parents have

to know exactly of

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to know exactly

what they teach is suitable. In my experience I heard some family are forcing their children strictly even in life style, studying etc. So the children are not happy and become anxiety. In conclusion to raise children grow up in

this

society can be

teach

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taught

them in a proper

way

and make them make a

decision

which is the most suitable and upright try to give them a reason

instead

of forcing so they can grow up as a good adult in the nearly future.