Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education in adult populations who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Formal schooling for the young is of immense significance for a country’s

socio-economic

involving social as well as economic factors

socioeconomic

development,

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, some people are convinced that more money should be allocated for educating illiterate adults. I agree with

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view to some extent and will analyse the issue in the following essay. On the one hand, government budgets in many countries, particularly in

under-developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

and developing

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, are limited.

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, if more funding is spent on improving adult literacy rates, the

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of children and adolescents may suffer as a consequence of less funding. Eventually, maintaining a suitable level and quality of

education

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, for both children and illiterate adults, may become an impossible task with limited funding, possibly negatively affecting the

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of both groups.

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, due to a decrease in the number of blue-collar jobs, thanks to automatic processes, a large number of illiterate adults who work in

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positions are being made redundant, and

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increasing the unemployment rate due to their lack of literacy skills when searching for other types of work.

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situation not only reduces the standard of living for many people, but is

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an underlying motive for a rise in social problems,

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as crime, homelessness, and poverty. Providing formal schooling

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adults who cannot read or write proves to be a useful measure to reduce the negative consequences that may occur in a society with high levels of adult illiteracy. In conclusion, state funding may not allow an adequate amount of money for the

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of both the youth

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adults

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effect.

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, I still believe that if more money is spent on educating illiterate adults, social welfare in

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regions will benefit tremendously.