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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

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It is believed by many people that developed countries should contribute more in combating climate change than developing countries, but others opine that every nation should have an equal
responsibility
 in protecting our
environment
. In my opinion, every nation should be equally responsible towards safeguarding the
environment
.
Firstly
, I would not beat around the bush, but would like to say that it is the
responsibility
 of all the countries in the world to protect their
environment
.
Accept space
.
 It is irrational to believe that developed countries should put more efforts in saving our
environment
. Earth is shared by all the countries whether it is developed or developing nation,
therefore
, its burden of every
country
 to take the obligation in saving the earth.
Furthermore
, I would like to say that the most populated countries are developing countries like India than developed
countres
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
, so it’s their
responsibility
 to take necessary steps in controlling it. From my standpoint If only developed countries get a higher
responsibility
 in combating climate change than it will create a chaos between the two nations as no
country
 would like the
interven
Suggestion
Interven
interview
intervene
 of another
country
 in their matters.
However
, there are some countries which don’t take any steps in protecting the
environment
 which somewhere is devastating for our
environment
. In a nutshell, I would say that very
country
 should put equal efforts in saving our
environment
 as they are sharing it too with others. If they don’t take the imperative steps now,
then
 it will pave the way of suffering for our future generation. Every
country
 show takes the
responsibility
 in protecting the
environment
.
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