Many people try to look younger than their age what are the reasons people do this. do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
In
this
modern era of fast paced lifestyle
many give importance to Suggestion
a fast paced lifestyle
beaty
and younger looks, the qualities that give pleasure to the senses
beauty
beat
however
others do not signify the same. variety
of reasons being important, the effects Suggestion
A variety
Variety
The variety
also
need to be considered abd
evaluated.
Beauty is the major criteria in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
of
selection and entry into careers like, acting, air hostess and steward, front office management, marketing, cosmetics etc. Suggestion
for
also there
are many areas of work that demand younger population over older. Accept comma addition
Also, there
Also there
social
stigma Suggestion
Social
also need
to be considered as charming people are considered to be attractive and Suggestion
also needs
approachble
. capable of being read with comprehension
approachable
having
its own Suggestion
Having
reasonsthis
has now become a great trend and Suggestion
reasons this
compeition
in earning bread and butter. a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
at
an Suggestion
At
individualist
level good look give them more Suggestion
individual
cofidence
and freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
exburanceto
one self
among the society and peers. reflexive form of "one"
oneself
hence in
Accept comma addition
Hence, in
Hence in
such
scenerios
affordability may not be an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenarios
scenario
diificult
, at instances the employer not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
also
provides the necessaities
foe the better promotions of the organization.
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
while
attractiveness consumes lot of time and energy, it could Suggestion
While
also
be of a major
drawback for someone who Suggestion
be a major
can not
spend the same,. can not
cannot
this
may even lead to anxiety and Suggestion
This
septisicim
in a way that effects
the work and have an effect upon
affects
selfesteem
. Suggestion
self esteem
secondly
cosmetic products and expensive treatments Suggestion
Secondly
cuase
adverse effects on skin and health. give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
thirdly there
is Accept comma addition
Thirdly, there
Thirdly there
contineous
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
contentious
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
concering
talent and skill over charm and beauty, with regard or relation to
concerning
easpecially
in to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
third
world countries like india
, women are given priority over men in some fields.
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
to
conclude looking beautiful and younger being an emerging trend, it has its own perks that outweigh the negative effects at an individual level.Suggestion
To
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