Many people try to look younger than their age what are the reasons people do this. do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?

In
this
modern era of
fast paced lifestyle
Suggestion
a fast paced lifestyle
many give importance to
beaty
the qualities that give pleasure to the senses
beauty
beat
and younger looks,
however
others do not signify the same.
variety
Suggestion
A variety
Variety
The variety
of reasons being important, the effects
also
need to be considered
abd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
evaluated. Beauty is the major criteria
of
Suggestion
for
selection and entry into careers like, acting, air hostess and steward, front office management, marketing, cosmetics etc.
also there
Accept comma addition
Also, there
Also there
are many areas of work that demand younger population over older.
social
Suggestion
Social
stigma
also need
Suggestion
also needs
to be considered as charming people are considered to be attractive and
approachble
capable of being read with comprehension
approachable
.
having
Suggestion
Having
its own
reasonsthis
Suggestion
reasons this
has now become a great trend and
compeition
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
in earning bread and butter.
at
Suggestion
At
an
individualist
Suggestion
individual
level good look give them more
cofidence
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
and
exburanceto
one self
reflexive form of "one"
oneself
among the society and peers.
hence in
Accept comma addition
Hence, in
Hence in
such
scenerios
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenarios
scenario
affordability may not be
diificult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
, at instances the employer
also
provides the
necessaities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
foe the better promotions of the organization.
while
Suggestion
While
attractiveness consumes lot of time and energy, it could
also
be of a major
Suggestion
be a major
drawback for someone who
can not
can not
cannot
spend the same,.
this
Suggestion
This
may even lead to anxiety and
septisicim
in a way that
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the work and
selfesteem
Suggestion
self esteem
.
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
cosmetic products and expensive treatments
cuase
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
adverse effects on skin and health.
thirdly there
Accept comma addition
Thirdly, there
Thirdly there
is
contineous
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
contentious
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
concering
with regard or relation to
concerning
talent and skill over charm and beauty,
easpecially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
in
third
world countries like
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
, women are given priority over men in some fields.
to
Suggestion
To
conclude looking beautiful and younger being an emerging trend, it has its own perks that outweigh the negative effects at an individual level.
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