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Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The chart illustrates the
amount
 of unemployed graduates (men and women) from 2008 to 2009. Overall, we can see that there were a lot more unemployed men than women in the period given. In general, there was more unemployment during the winter and autumn months, for both groups in October the most.
Firstly
, the percentage of unemployed women were the same for April 2008, July 2008, April 2009, it was the lowest number.
Secondly
, the highest
amount
 was in October 2008 and October 2009. As to men, as can be seen, the smallest number was in April 2008 and July 2008.
Then
, the greatest number of males who were out of work during the period was again in October both years.
Finally
, despite the fact that they both have volatile structure, the
amount
 of women was more stable than the
amount
 of men and it differs approximately twice.
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  • evolving
  • aspirations
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  • accessibility
  • catalyst
  • economic development
  • heritage
  • conserves
  • cultural
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  • operational inefficiencies
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  • carbon footprint
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