Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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day and age, more and more children are inactive in their free time than they used to be in the past. It is one of

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reasons lead sports lessons to must be obligatory in schools. I personally agree with

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method and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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and foremost, physical activity improves

chidren’s

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children’s

children

child’s

child

mental well-being.

Sceince

a particular branch of scientific knowledge

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shows

that it can reduce

short-term feeling

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short-term feelings

of anxiety and sleeplessness. Take

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regular

exercise to stimulate

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the process of using your mind to consider something carefully

thinking

, memory

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power and creativity

of

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the brain

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, it is useful to help children get in shape and avoid their health risk. More specifically, in football respect, constant movement in a long time is a main factor to burn fat and gain muscles. The lower the cholesterol content, the healthier the heart becomes.

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, football

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is not only built

up a stronger

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resistance, but

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train their flexibility and judgment.

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, sports lessons can develop comprehensively both constitution and spirit of children. Another special consideration in

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case is that sports help children learn discipline and working with

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

as a team. Sport is the best way teaching kids some simple disciplines like getting to practice on time, or doing the right techniques and rules in order not to be punished.

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children join in their favourite sport, they will be more active and confident to show their skill and learn from the others.

Futhermore

in addition

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, by participating in them, children will experience valuable lessons when work as

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a team

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, most of the sports require the team members to co-ordinate and support each other to achieve the common goal of

wining

having won

winning

the game. They have to make a united effort by

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(Old Testament) third son of Adam and Eve; given by God in place of the murdered Abel

Seth

-control, interact with other members. These skills will eventually make the person an extrovert and help in developing leadership qualities. To sum up, I believe that sports lessons must be obligatory in school because it make children fit and active. They will

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improve their

softskills

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soft skills

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, there must be a variety of sports for children to choose their desired one, which make them joyfully take part in, not to be anxiety.