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Task: Life was simpler without somuch of technology.How far you agree.?

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Introduction
Before the technologies took over the world,
life
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 was
more easier
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easier
 in all ways. I partly agree with
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 statement as there are many benefits of the same.
Body paragraph 1
Technology
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 is the application of scientific knowledge in practical ways to make our routine chores easier.Since
last
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 few years
,
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,
usage of
technology
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 had exponentially increased as well as affected our daily
life
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. We have started to rely
up on
in contact with, on top of
upon
technology
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 for our every needs. It is because
technology
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 had impacted the lives by reducing the physical exertion and
time
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.In
this
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 busy
life
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,
time
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 is very important and reliance towards
technology
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 helps to save
time
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.We cannot say completely that
technology
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 had made our
life
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 more complicated. Because there are pros and cons to
this
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. We cannot think of a
life
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with out
in absence of
without
 mobile, Television
,
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,
 ATM
,
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,
etc
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 nowadays.All of these are the results of
technology
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.
Body paragraph 2
Even though
automation
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 had made our work easier
,
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,
many people think that
life
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 before the
automation
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 was
more simpler
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more simple
.The basic idea of
this
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 thinking is that machinery had affected the family
time
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 and kids too.In older days the important way of entertainment was outdoor games
,
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,
moreover
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 each and every household chores were done manually, but now these are done with the help of sophisticated technologies and kids depend more on electronic gadgets for entertainment as well as learning purpose.
This
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 is affecting the health of people as due to lack of physical exertion. Apart from
this
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,
automation
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 is adding to the pollution and thereby global warming.
Conclusion
In conclusion, heart without the influence of machinery is still c
onsidered pe
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ahealth
ier, even though
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eventhough there are many gains from
automation
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