The following is an essay submitted by one of our students. In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The government, deciding on moving the

industrialand

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industrial and

business areas outside the

city

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area

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, thereby on the outskirts of the

city

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. The wide

city

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area

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of the

city

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is for the

population

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to grow and establish. The workers and employees of the industries as well as business men whose

actiities

any specific behavior

activities

of daily life includes work. So, going to outskirts of

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city

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the city

a city

cities

everyday

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every day

from

city

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area

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is challenging. The

city

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population

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is expanding with the

convertion

an event that results in a transformation

conversion

of

rular

living in or characteristic of farming or country life

rural

population

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to the urban and so is the town life. Big infrastructures,

sky scrapers

a very tall building with many stories

skyscrapers

are all constructed to

accomodate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

such

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huge

population

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, as the land is not sufficient.

With

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To

increase in the

population

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the needs rises as well and so to accomplish those

needs one

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needs, one

has to uplift the production of goods to meet the daily needs. There is

increase

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an increase

in the number of industrial areas which is challenging

to

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for

government as the

man

any very large body of (salt) water

main

force needed for

successul

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

working is high. Due to increase in the

industial

of or relating to or resulting from industry

industrial

area

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the

area

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for pupils to live

peacefull

in a peaceful manner

peacefully

is abandoned due to various

tyoes

a subdivision of a particular kind of thing

types

of pollution like air, noise, water and increased dirt. So, the need to shift

these

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this area

these areas

area

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on the outskirts

for

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of

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city

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the city

a city

is

mandotary

required by rule

mandatory

for peaceful living. The businesses are expanding as well,

although

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they do not provide

such

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nucience

a message that seems to convey no meaning

nonsense

nuisance

innocence

as

industries but

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industries, but

for varied business the demands are different

such

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as more need to use of computers, air conditioners, printers, cutting machines, melding machines and what not for

differet

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

sorts of work. Even it is not necessary

the the

definite article

the

staff working

their

in or at that place

there

is from within the

city

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, there are pupils living in hostels as well, so shifting them on outside the

city

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area

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gives better protection from facilities like fire, medical and many more. The

world wide

involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

worldwide

known fire

trajedy

an event resulting in great loss and misfortune

tragedy

of world trade

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

of united states of

america

North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776

America

, if that company was not in the middle of the

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city there

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city, there

might have been the chance to rescue as many pupils as possible and stop fire more ahead in time. There are immense benefits as well for the industries and

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

businesses

to be within the cities which includes

cuttting

the activity of selecting the scenes to be shown and putting them together to create a film

cutting

quitting

short the time to travel to the work

area

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. Pupils working in their can have a visit to home for lunch with family in lunch breaks. View of hustle and bustle in the

city

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from the sky

scrappered

any of various hand tools for scraping

scrapers

window. Conclusively,

benefits

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the benefits

are

their

in or at that place

there

for both the sides but as a

responsiblity

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

of

government they

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government, they

are responsible equally for the adequate rise of economy as well as the protection and welfare of

pupil

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pupils

the pupil

. So, looking at advantages the disadvantages are

negligable

so small as to be meaningless; insignificant

negligible

.

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, shifting of industrial and

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

areas in

outskirts

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the outskirts

of the

city

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is the wise choice.