The following is an essay submitted by one of our students. In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The government, deciding on moving the
industrialand
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industrial and
business areas outside the
city
area
, thereby on the outskirts of the
city
. The wide
city
area
of the
city
is for the
population
to grow and establish. The workers and employees of the industries as well as business men whose
actiities
any specific behavior
activities
of daily life includes work. So, going to outskirts of
city
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the city
a city
cities
everyday
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every day
from
city
area
is challenging. The
city
population
is expanding with the
convertion
an event that results in a transformation
conversion
of
rular
living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
population
to the urban and so is the town life. Big infrastructures,
sky scrapers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
are all constructed to
accomodate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
such
huge
population
, as the land is not sufficient.
With
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To
increase in the
population
the needs rises as well and so to accomplish those
needs one
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needs, one
has to uplift the production of goods to meet the daily needs. There is
increase
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an increase
in the number of industrial areas which is challenging
to
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for
government as the
man
any very large body of (salt) water
main
force needed for
successul
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
working is high. Due to increase in the
industial
of or relating to or resulting from industry
industrial
area
the
area
for pupils to live
peacefull
in a peaceful manner
peacefully
is abandoned due to various
tyoes
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
types
of pollution like air, noise, water and increased dirt. So, the need to shift
these
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this area
these areas
area
on the outskirts
for
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of
city
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the city
a city
is
mandotary
required by rule
mandatory
for peaceful living. The businesses are expanding as well,
although
they do not provide
such
nucience
a message that seems to convey no meaning
nonsense
nuisance
innocence
as
industries but
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industries, but
for varied business the demands are different
such
as more need to use of computers, air conditioners, printers, cutting machines, melding machines and what not for
differet
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
sorts of work. Even it is not necessary
the the
definite article
the
staff working
their
in or at that place
there
is from within the
city
, there are pupils living in hostels as well, so shifting them on outside the
city
area
gives better protection from facilities like fire, medical and many more. The
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
known fire
trajedy
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
tragedy
of world trade
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of united states of
america
North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776
America
, if that company was not in the middle of the
city there
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city, there
might have been the chance to rescue as many pupils as possible and stop fire more ahead in time. There are immense benefits as well for the industries and
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
to be within the cities which includes
cuttting
the activity of selecting the scenes to be shown and putting them together to create a film
cutting
quitting
short the time to travel to the work
area
. Pupils working in their can have a visit to home for lunch with family in lunch breaks. View of hustle and bustle in the
city
from the sky
scrappered
any of various hand tools for scraping
scrapers
window. Conclusively,
benefits
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the benefits
are
their
in or at that place
there
for both the sides but as a
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of
government they
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government, they
are responsible equally for the adequate rise of economy as well as the protection and welfare of
pupil
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pupils
the pupil
. So, looking at advantages the disadvantages are
negligable
so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
.
Thus
, shifting of industrial and
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
areas in
outskirts
Suggestion
the outskirts
of the
city
is the wise choice.
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