Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Countries around the globe are already facing significant issues relating to the environment,
as a result
of exploding population. In the coming years,
this
will put pressure on / throttle / suffocate other areas like health, infrastructure and education.
This
essay will discuss the problems Australia will face in the
next
ten years and
also
suggest the possible solutions to overcome these problems. In the coming years, the ever-growing population, will not only increase the burden on the education system, but
also
limit the availability of jobs in the market.
This
will
further
lead to a shortage of skilled / white collar jobs and people will have to do menial jobs to earn a living.
For example
, in Australia, highly educated people work odd jobs due to a lack of skilled jobs that match their educational qualifications. Due to the increasing powers of the ruling party, corruption is another menace that threatens Australia.
For example
, it is said that the Liberal party came into power after they offered huge amounts of money to businesses across Australia. The need of the hour is to wake up from our slumber and work hard on the solutions to make a better tomorrow. The most important step is to attract
workforce
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a workforce
the workforce
to
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in
regional areas by offering incentives like improved infrastructure and availability of jobs.
This
will not only reduce the pressure on cities, but
also
promote development of regional areas.
Additionally
, there needs to be an upper limit / cap on the donations political parties can receive from corporations. In a nut-shell,
this
essay discussed the problems Australia will face in the near future along with the ways to tackle these problems. The
millenials
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
millionaires
of today
need
Suggestion
needs
to fight for a sustainable future by taking relevant steps in the present.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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