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Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. Is this is a positive or negative. Give your opinion .

#parents #freedom #children
In
modern era
Suggestion
the modern era
,
Accept space
,
 parents give more liberty to their offspring as compare to previous time. It proved to be very fruitful for them because it has
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
 of benefits which I discuss in the following paragraphs. To commence with
,
Accept space
,
 there are
c
the seat within a bishop's diocese where his cathedral is located
see
 plenty of reasons to support my viewpoint.
Initially
,
Accept space
,
minor
Suggestion
minors
a minor
 can get
great chance
Suggestion
a great chance
 to develop their personality as they take all decisions by
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
. It proved harmful to face all
kind
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kinds
 of bundles in their
life
.
For example
, earlier minor cannot take any important decision of their
life
 and they were not much independent. So
,
Accept space
,
 their
life
 was fully depend on other people. But at present they are independent
that is
 a positive development.
However
, toddlers can learn various lessons if they have
freedom
Suggestion
the freedom
 to do any work in their
life
 because they
also
 have
right
Suggestion
the right
a right
 to enjoy their
life
. Due to
this
, in their future they can become successful, as
children
Suggestion
the children
 would have knowledge regarding their
further
life
.
As a result
,
Accept space
,
 parents do not need to worry for their offsprings.
Last
 but not least
,
Accept space
,
 by having freedom
childer
a person who designs and writes and tests computer programs
coders
 can learn about technology as they can use it as well as gain new experience. To recapitulate
,
Accept space
,
although
 it
put
Suggestion
puts
 some negative effect on children yet it has proved beneficial for them. So
,
Accept space
,
 according to me parents should aware their minors about the
further
 process of their
life
.
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