Some people believe that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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denies that a successful life is the most desirable goal,

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people curious about the deciding factors that reaching a peak of their career. There is some debate about the contributors. Some people argue that practical things,

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as assets or physical beauty are important,

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, others believe that personal abilities, including hard-working and determination, is a crucial role in achieving success. I personally agree

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and I believe that personal efforts are

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factors. Some sets of peoples believe that a large amount of property and a charming appearance is necessary to reach achievement. In the

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place, considering human nature, people prefer naturally beautiful creatures rather than an ugly

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with a good looking gains not only attention but

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favours from others. More specifically, it there are two-individual with similar work abilities,

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's appearance is better than the other,

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the human with an outstanding outfit will be promoted than the ordinary

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the character will ensure the victory of his or her career with high salaries. On top of that, money is the key factor to the goal.

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is because, the seed money, which can invest right away is powerful compared to a

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who has a financial loan, The

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with the property will achieve

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's goal faster and easier. Admittedly, I partly agree with the view that two contributing factors,

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, I strongly believe that personal skills without any efforts play a pivotal role in reaching the goal.

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of all, the endeavours of people working to help gain some valuable experiences in the aspect of life. To explain in detail, if young student practices, general times at home, or at school, it will minimize the risk of repeating mistakes,

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the student gains a higher score on a formal examination.

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, the determination motivates people to allow them to set up goals and support them to move forward with their life goals. In conclusion, there are not certain ways to achieve success,

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, I personally concur that personal efforts are more essential than the gifted

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, including money or appearance.