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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. comics books radio television film theatre

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 graph shows about usage of radio and
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 in a day by the UK population. It shows, Many people are like to see more
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 than radio. The bold line shows, watching
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 in a day.
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, as the day starts, the percentage of watching
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 is less around 5% between 6 to 10 in the morning.
However
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, it rises up to around 15% at noon. It stays same for two hours. After that, It rises up to its peak value at 8 in the night almost 45%. And
then
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, it falls down to 2%, around at 2 in the midnight.
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, the light line shows the usage of radio. At around 8 in the morning it rises up to its peak value to approx 27%. With the hour passes, the percentage falls down till 3 in the afternoon to approx 12%, while in the afternoon at 4, it rises by around 2%. And again, it falls down with the hour passing and reach same as
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 at 3 in the midnight.
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