Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

ART
CONSIDER A FRAMEWORK OF SOCIETY
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REFLECT PEOPLE TRADITIONAL AND NORM
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ARTIST REQUIRE FINANCIAL
SUPPORT
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BESIDE MEMORIAL AND EMOTIONAL
SUPPORT
TO BECOME CREATIVE AND MOTIVATED
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ASSISTANCE ALLMOST COME FROM PUBLIC BODIES
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LIKE
GOVERNMENT
AND OTHER PUBLIC ORGANIZATIONS. MY OPINION IS THAT
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MORE ASSISTANT TO
ART
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WILL DEVELOP
ART
AND IMPROVE IT
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BUILD A NEW GENERATION OF ARTISTS.NEGATIVE THINKING LIKE WASTE OF
MONEY
MAKE A GAP BETWEEN ARTISTS AND POPULATION
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ALL THE
MONEY
GIVEN FOR THEM WILL DIRECTED TO G
ART
SERVICE
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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT UNDERSTAND MEAN OF
ART
THINK IT IS WASTE OF
MONEY
.I DISAGREE WITH THEM
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I BELIEVE
ART
IS FACE OF ANY COUNTRY OR SOIETY
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SONG
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DRAMA OR FILM OR WHAT EVER APPEAR THE HUMAN
ART
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NATIONAL INTERST AND GEAOGRAFIC NATURE EVEN.
ALOT
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A LOT
OF COUNTRIES
GOVERNMENT
NOWADAYS
SUPPORT
ART
BECUASE
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BECAUSE
THEY KNOW IT IS ONE OF FORCE OF POWER
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THEY HELP MEDIA LIKE TV
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RADIO AND NEWSPAPER TO FOCUSE ON IT.
ALSO
THEY BUILD ALOT OF ACADEMIC COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITY FACULTIES FOR
ART
EDUCATION
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EITHER UNDERGRADUATE OR POST GRADUATE STUDIES TO INCOURGE STUDENT AND NEW APPLICANT FOR
THIS
TYPE OF EDUCATION, THERE IS ALOT OF ARTIST NOW ADAYS BECOME POPULAR
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AND THEY PROVIDE MANY SOCIAL ACTIVITIES AND ASSIST PEOPLE
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MOST OF THEM
COMMON AND
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COMMON, AND
KNOWN
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SPECIALLY IN SOCIAL MEDIA
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FOR EXAMPLE
IN CINEMA
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SINGER OR ACTORS.THEY CONSIDER AMMBASADOR OF THEIR COUNTRIES
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LIKE MICHEL JAKSON OR BOB MARLEY. IN CONCLUTION I BELIEVE
GOVERNMENT
SUPPORT
TO
ART
MUST BE
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AND I REFUSE REGARDING THINKING IT IS ONLY
MONEY
WASTE.I HOPE ALL
GOVERNMENT
IN ALL COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD THINK POSITIVELY TO THE DIFFERENT SORT OF
ART
.AND IMPOWER IT.
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