Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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ART

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CONSIDER A FRAMEWORK OF SOCIETY

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REFLECT PEOPLE TRADITIONAL AND NORM

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ARTIST REQUIRE FINANCIAL

SUPPORT

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BESIDE MEMORIAL AND EMOTIONAL

SUPPORT

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TO BECOME CREATIVE AND MOTIVATED

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ASSISTANCE ALLMOST COME FROM PUBLIC BODIES

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GOVERNMENT

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AND OTHER PUBLIC ORGANIZATIONS. MY OPINION IS THAT

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MORE ASSISTANT TO

ART

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WILL DEVELOP

ART

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AND IMPROVE IT

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BUILD A NEW GENERATION OF ARTISTS.NEGATIVE THINKING LIKE WASTE OF

MONEY

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MAKE A GAP BETWEEN ARTISTS AND POPULATION

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ALL THE

MONEY

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GIVEN FOR THEM WILL DIRECTED TO G

ART

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SERVICE

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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT UNDERSTAND MEAN OF

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THINK IT IS WASTE OF

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.I DISAGREE WITH THEM

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I BELIEVE

ART

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IS FACE OF ANY COUNTRY OR SOIETY

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SONG

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DRAMA OR FILM OR WHAT EVER APPEAR THE HUMAN

ART

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NATIONAL INTERST AND GEAOGRAFIC NATURE EVEN.

ALOT

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A LOT

OF COUNTRIES

GOVERNMENT

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NOWADAYS

SUPPORT

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ART

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BECUASE

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BECAUSE

THEY KNOW IT IS ONE OF FORCE OF POWER

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THEY HELP MEDIA LIKE TV

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RADIO AND NEWSPAPER TO FOCUSE ON IT.

ALSO

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THEY BUILD ALOT OF ACADEMIC COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITY FACULTIES FOR

ART

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EDUCATION

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EITHER UNDERGRADUATE OR POST GRADUATE STUDIES TO INCOURGE STUDENT AND NEW APPLICANT FOR

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TYPE OF EDUCATION, THERE IS ALOT OF ARTIST NOW ADAYS BECOME POPULAR

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AND THEY PROVIDE MANY SOCIAL ACTIVITIES AND ASSIST PEOPLE

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MOST OF THEM

COMMON AND

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COMMON, AND

KNOWN

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SPECIALLY IN SOCIAL MEDIA

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FOR EXAMPLE

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IN CINEMA

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SINGER OR ACTORS.THEY CONSIDER AMMBASADOR OF THEIR COUNTRIES

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LIKE MICHEL JAKSON OR BOB MARLEY. IN CONCLUTION I BELIEVE

GOVERNMENT

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SUPPORT

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ART

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MUST BE

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AND I REFUSE REGARDING THINKING IT IS ONLY

MONEY

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WASTE.I HOPE ALL

GOVERNMENT

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IN ALL COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD THINK POSITIVELY TO THE DIFFERENT SORT OF

ART

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.AND IMPOWER IT.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

257 words

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