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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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 Helou, Hope my letter finds you in good health. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Miriam Medawar and I have BEEN RENTING your FLAT in Block A of Al Jawhary building, 4th floor since December 2019. I am writing
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 to inform you that I am not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Please allow me to explain and elaborate on
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 subject. As a start, the living room furniture became very old.
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 can be seen obviously by its torn fabric due to usage. The coffee table has many scratches, and its glass is broken.
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 can be very dangerous for my children. As for the bedroom's closet, it does not close properly.
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 is actually becoming very annoying noting that I am a housewife and I spend most of my time at home.
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, I would like to request some actions to be taken like either replacing the damaged items or paying 50% of the new goods' price I am willing to buy. The sum would be 2.000 dollars. Thank you in advance for your understanding and prompt support. Waiting for your feedback. Gratefully yours, Miriam Medawar
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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