Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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The earth has turned into a global village due to an advancement in the scientific research and inventions. Ultimately the crimes have Linking Words
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believe the same. As it helps the security agencies to counter any unwanted event, so its benefits have overcome the disadvantages. Linking Words
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, the crime rate of Lahore city in the year 2019 has decreased many folds due to close CCTV monitoring.
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, according to an American survey of 2019, the fear of being tracked has decreased the use of mobile phones in the youngsters.
To conclude, I believe that it's very important to trace the acts of the inhabitants in order to maintain peace in the state, but the rulers must develop ways and means so that the common people must be taught the importance and the benefits, so that they should not feel bad about its use.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite