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The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many nations who living in suburbs and urban areas face to traffic congestion and transportation issues. It is claimed that as a solution, people motivate to move into the town and I partially agree with
this
 statement because it is not a real answer for the question. On the one hand, people were living in beyond the
city
 centre could easy to reach their offices and factories.
Therefore
, it directly negative effect to transport problems and traffic jams and minimize that problems workers encourage to move to the town.
For instance
, many government and private organizations have allocated staff houses and hostels for staff members.
In addition
, giving opportunity has been living in the
city
 area
as a result
 of, built a trend reduction of private vehicles. People come to the urban place because they can use buses or by foot for going to work.
On the other hand
, anybody like to live in the place where they prefer location.
Although
, home and land are in favourite place vital factor in democracy.
Therefore
, government should not limitation people`s freedom.
Moreover
, some nations hate
city
 life due to their behaviour is very complex and expensive. Many works always try to go to work from county side. Another reason is people stay in rule areas is most of houses in urban areas very small.
For example
, high rise flats and apartments. People motivate to move from the suburbs and countryside to town is not a best answer for growing traffic and transport problems. According to my view, the government should improve the road network and infrastructure facilities in
city limit
Suggestion
the city limit
city limits
.
Submitted by Sumedha wijesekara on

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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