The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The given images represent a wave-energy machine, and its modern updates, but
also
the place where it can be located. In this
essay
I am going to examine both images and give a relevant conclusion.
The first image relatesAdd a comma
,essay
a
wave-energy machine and the way Change preposition
to a
is
Correct your spelling
it
functioning
. As we can see the main characteristics of the machinery are: the turbine, Wrong verb form
functions
electricity
generator, and Correct article usage
the electricity
the
two chambers. These are the main features necessary for Correct article usage
apply
this
mechanism to function. Comparing
with the old model of Wrong verb form
Compared
this
kind, the difference of
the new one is given by the two chambers. These two separate rooms allow Change preposition
between
water
to enter in
the first space, which after Change preposition
apply
that is
transformed into air
, Add an article
the air
that
is pushed into the Correct pronoun usage
which
second
chamber. For
this
reason
the modern model is faster, and it can produce more energy Add a comma
,reason
then
the old one.
The Replace the word
than
second
image illustrates the areas where this
mechanism can be found and the
construction of it. As we can see they are fully Change the word
its
depended
on Replace the word
dependent
water
and Add an article
the water
this
is the main factor which determinate
the cost. Deeper Replace the word
determines
the
Correct article usage
apply
water
means a higher construction and inevitably a higher budget for the finishing of the project. On the other hand
, if the water
is more shallow, then
the installation price is with
Change preposition
without
no
doubt lower.Correct determiner usage
a
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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