In some countries university students live away from home and in another cities wile study. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another cities?

many universities has students from differient cities,those
student
leave their hometown and live in another place, where is their
university
is located,living a way from home consider new experience for them, i think the disadvantage does not outweigh the advantages for many reasons ,i will discuse them in these essay
firstly
, living in new different place for students make them interact and connect with new people and gain live experience ,
additionally
it build their personalities ,for instant ,they depend on themself
instead
of family ,
for example
student
of
university
of khartoum how come from many states ,when arrive immediately they start meet each other in rooms,kitchen area,creat new relationship which is run to the futur .
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leaving home
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becomes
new life
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secondly
,
student
who travell away for study must accept new culture and value,adapt to newly environment,as universities is place for academic achievement and others activities and skills ,it built
student
competencies and make them think critically,team and group life and trainy them to sove problems and strugles,
for example
alot of succefull people in real life start jurney of career or business from relationship or social relation in
university
,like Barak Obama ,the president of united state ,start his political path from harvard
university
and he has met his wife there
also
.
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think little disadvantages like living away from family
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ion,in my opinion disadvantages of travelling away from their cities to
university
and pass all these distance to achieve dreams and return with certificate does not outweigh the advantages,
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