You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: Mention why you would like to join the trip. Ask some general questions about the trip. Mention how you can be helpful.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter as an expression of my interest in joining the

trip

to Australia

month. I would like to join the

trip

because I have been to Australia before and have a quite good knowledge of the place we are going to visit.

This

will help us to make the

trip

enjoyable and informative for the students. I would

also

like to know about the accommodation that the students and the

parents

accompanying them will receive while they stay. Can the

parents

stay with their kids or will there be separate living arrangements for the kids and

parents

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As I know about the place very well, so I think that if I will join the

trip

, I can help all to gain more knowledge of the country and its diverse culture.

Moreover

, I can

also

help with my parenting skills to support children while they are away from their

parents

. Hope you will consider my interest and will permit me to join the

trip

. Yours faithfully,

Mrinaal

Correct your spelling

Mrinal

Naiker.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural enrichment
educational experience
personal interest
itinerary
accommodation
roles and responsibilities
safety measures
emergency procedures
medical and disciplinary issues
first aid certification
language proficiency
volunteer experience
group management
supervision
schedule adherence
pre-trip preparations
post-trip follow-up
photo sharing
event recap

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