You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: Mention why you would like to join the trip. Ask some general questions about the trip. Mention how you can be helpful.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter as an expression of my interest in joining the

trip

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to Australia

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month. I would like to join the

trip

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because I have been to Australia before and have a quite good knowledge of the place we are going to visit.

This

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will help us to make the

trip

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enjoyable and informative for the students. I would

also

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like to know about the accommodation that the students and the

parents

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accompanying them will receive while they stay. Can the

parents

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stay with their kids or will there be separate living arrangements for the kids and

parents

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As I know about the place very well, so I think that if I will join the

trip

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, I can help all to gain more knowledge of the country and its diverse culture.

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, I can

also

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help with my parenting skills to support children while they are away from their

parents

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. Hope you will consider my interest and will permit me to join the

trip

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. Yours faithfully,

Mrinaal

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Mrinal

Naiker.

BshergillWed Jul 01 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural enrichment
educational experience
personal interest
itinerary
accommodation
roles and responsibilities
safety measures
emergency procedures
medical and disciplinary issues
first aid certification
language proficiency
volunteer experience
group management
supervision
schedule adherence
pre-trip preparations
post-trip follow-up
photo sharing
event recap

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