differences between countries become less evident each year. nowadays, all over the world people share same fashion, advertising brand, food habits and tv channels. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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The advent of modernization, has led to globalization amongst each territory. Today world has become one global village in terms of fashion, brands of advertising as well as eating habits and television channels. There are many profits of
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, after that my insights were heightened and I discovered my taste in supernatural things, which were not really but amazing for enjoyment.  After that I watched harry potter, batman, superman, wonder women and many more. There was a time when me and my colleagues had never seen or even heard of the burger, before the investment of McDonalds in my country.
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, today every restaurant has varieties of burger in their menus, but only after pioneering of Mc Donalds. The benefits were two sided, one got to taste which was never seen and another had increased revenue. The drawbacks, even minimal and are incurable, but are present. The most widely faced one is that, as students are now travelling to another country for a better life and more money. There are huge chances for competition for living for the children of that nation. Which will lead to the violence and increased rate of crime. Wicked behaviour with Outlanders and partiality in the job placements.There was the an incident when a girl from japan went to Italy for her study of medicine, as Italy is advance of medicine in the world. When she inaugurated her clinic, the people of that province avoided going their apart from when left without an option. In
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Global market
  • Brand proliferation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Globalization
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Mass media
  • Cultural identity
  • Monoculture
  • Consumerism
  • Multinational corporations
  • Cross-cultural
  • Ethnocentrism
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Local traditions
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