In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

In recent years, because of urbanisation, a mushroom growth of large shopping malls has been seen in the suburbs of the cities and towns. Many people are worried that
this
phenomenon may lead to the increase in
use
Suggestion
the use
of cars and
this
would not be good for the environment. Looking at the advantages of having large shopping malls on the outskirts of cities, I believe that the disadvantage of increased use of cars can be overlooked. There are two benefits of having shopping malls in the out-of-town sites.
To begin
with, we all know that that the suburban land costs much less and
therefore
the rents and other operating costs of these shopping complexes is much less. Lower operating cost
directly leads
Suggestion
has directly led
to lower prices.
For example
, we have hypermarket and a franchise shopping mall
such
as Carrefour on Alexandrian-Cairo road.
Secondly
, the shopping centres in these areas would be definitely bigger because of more availability of land and so consumers will have more choices as more variety could be displayed.
Furthermore
, it would help ease urban traffic and housing pressures the
city
centre. The
city
centres are already too congested and opening big shopping centres here would worsen the situation. We all know that rapid urbanisation is taking place and more and more people are shifting from the villages to the cities. In Egypt,
for example
, it is hard to find parking lots in malls located in Downtown Cairo.
Hence
, if these shopping centres are on the outskirts of cities, they would be nearer to the neighbouring villages and many of them would not
then
need to move to cities as some comforts of the cities would be nearer to their homes.
However
, there could be the possible disadvantage of pollution; if big malls are located outside the
city
, the suburbs with their beautiful nature may be affected.
For instance
, in Greater Cairo, some shopping malls dispose with their waste in the lands outside, and
hence
, suburbs have lost part of its natural beauty.
Therefore
, having industries and malls outside the
city
could harm the environment. That would be a catastrophe. All in all, I pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that having shopping centres in the suburbs definitely has more advantages than disadvantages. It is important to expand the business and have malls outside the
city
, but it is equally significant to protect the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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