You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages? You should write at least 250 words.

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A lot of people use telephone and internet
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We have lots of social media.Folk frequently apply media like
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What's
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Instagram
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Telegram and etc. Social media have many
intractions
the force by which one object attracts another
attractions
interactions
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a person
the person
who is travelling in the other country or
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materials
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people communicate with letters and it was so difficult because you do not know when your letter will reach for the addressee. From my point of view
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I speak with my sister when she was in the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
country, we talked everyday.I
can not
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say like
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, that's why we talk every hour. Lot's of the social media are not as good as they are cracked up to be. There are drawback on the internet
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You see
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the networks develop so swift
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it is minus for us. Many new social networks appear
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which are used from the oldest to the youngest people
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is not good, because here you can easily be deceived
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it can be a
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
environment for scammers.
For instance
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at the moment we have lots scammers whether they covered by the name of your relatives and asked to send them the money
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And they are talking
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prefer or wish to do something
like
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they need
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the money
because of unforeseen circumstances or they do not look
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at
the pink of health
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