Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant money each year. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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Huge amount of taxpayer's money is being allocated to investigate outer
space
anually
without missing a year
annually
only
.
This
essay will demonstrate that
this
is a positive development and can lead to new scientific discoveries. It will
first
suggest that
ability
Suggestion
the ability
to forecast natural disasters is the primary advantage, followed by
description
Suggestion
a description
of
th
definite article
the
fact that
this
kind of research projects are very expensive with
minor chance
Suggestion
minor chances
a minor chance
of success.
First
of all,
space
exploration makes it possible for people to predict the weather beforehand.
That is
to say, observation through satellites allows them to get information about changes in the atmosphere which enables government to warn or evacuate the citizens if there are certain
catasrophes
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
catastrophe
that may threaten them. By his way fundings for exploring
space
may save millions of lives.
For example
, in 2004,
metereologists
a specialist who studies processes in the earth's atmosphere that cause weather conditions
meteorologists
of Sun City Center
,
Accept space
,
Florida, forecasted the strike of
hurricane
Suggestion
a hurricane
the hurricane
hurricanes
with the speed of 30 m/s and it caused to prevent many deaths.
However
, the
space
expedition costs so much and rate of success is quite low. Building spacecrafts and shuttles
requires
Suggestion
require
sophisticated equipments and special devices with well-qualified experts to operate them which all lead to enormous expenses. Despite
this
huge fundings, a small accident can cause a big failure or even death of many.
For instance
, the Challenger
space
shuttle exploded within minutes of its launch resulting the death of 7 astronauts, in 1986. In general, setting aside much money for
space
exploration programs is a welcome trend as it will provide
further
development that can facilitate the human's life through foreseeing possible threats.
Although
, it may cause some dreadful outcomes, its overall effect on mankind is positive. In conclusion, funding large amount of money on
space
exploration may seem unprofitable and has
litlle success rate
Suggestion
a little success rate
little success rate
to some extent, the advantage that it brings to humans by giving a chance to predict climate changes is considerable.
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