The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

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The pie charts compare the proportion of world

forest

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and

timber

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five continents.

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while

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Africa

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is the region with the highest percentage of

forest

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cover, Asia is in the opposite situation.

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, the largest amount of world

timber

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is taken from North

America

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while

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Africa

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is by far the smallest lumber producer. In terms of

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forest

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forests

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Africa

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occupies the largest area, 27% of the

world

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forest

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, which is almost twice as much as that of Asia. North

America

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comes in

second

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with their green zone amounting to a quarter of the total

forest

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. Meanwhile, Europe and South

America

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account for only 18% and 16% of

global

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forest

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. Regarding

the

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timber

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production, North American countries

contains

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the largest proportion, contributing to 30% of total global

timber

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. Meanwhile, South

America

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and Europe can produce about 23% and 20% of global

timber

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respectively.

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timber

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Africa

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makes up only 9% of total global production, which is exactly

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half of that in Asia.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber, africa, america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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