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Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.
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The pie charts compare the proportion of world
forest
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 and
timber
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in
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on
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 five continents.
Overall
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,
while
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Africa
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 is the region with the highest percentage of
forest
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 cover, Asia is in the opposite situation.
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, the largest amount of world
timber
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 is taken from North
America
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,
while
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Africa
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 is by far the smallest lumber producer. In terms of
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forest
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forests
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,
Africa
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 occupies the largest area, 27% of the
world
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forest
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, which is almost twice as much as that of Asia. North
America
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 comes in
second
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 with their green zone amounting to a quarter of the total
forest
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. Meanwhile, Europe and South
America
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 account for only 18% and 16% of
global
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the global
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forest
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. Regarding
the
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apply
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timber
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 production, North American countries
contains
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 the largest proportion, contributing to 30% of total global
timber
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. Meanwhile, South
America
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 and Europe can produce about 23% and 20% of global
timber
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 respectively.
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,
timber
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 in
Africa
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 makes up only 9% of total global production, which is exactly
a
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half of that in Asia.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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