Many people believe that we should protect all wanimals while others believe we should just protect some of them

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Many people believe that we should protect all

wanimals

a living organism characterized by voluntary movement

animals

w animals

while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your People’s opinions differ as to whether all the existing

species

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of animals should be preserved equally. While it is believed that we should only focus on certain animals, In my opinion all animal

species

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should receive equal protection. On the one hand, certain animals are more important in the

invironment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

environmental

and ought to be prioritised over others. Kangaroos and Koalas

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for example

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, can only survive and breed in Australian grounds,

thus

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making Australia special place and famous for taking care of these two

species

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, relocation of those animals

into

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other parts of the world might result in the loss of the

species

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and breeding programs in other areas are

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likely to go in vain. It is

therefore

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important that

Kangaro

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Kangaroo

Kangaroos

and Koala

species

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stay in Australia and more funding should go to preserving them in Australia alone.

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however

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, animal rights are equal for all animals and

therefore

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each deserves equal protection for 2 clear reasons. It is against animal rights to group animal

species

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into more important or less important. Each and every animal has its unique characteristic and role in the environment.

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, if kangaroos are special and belong to Australia only, domestic dogs can be regarded equally important for being safeguards of people.

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, all animals should be given equal attention. In conclusion,

although

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particular animal

species

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can be seen as more special,

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believe that all the existing animals need to be protected equally.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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270 words

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