The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In
21th century
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the 21th century
, there is a great competition for policy,
economic
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economics
economy
,
society
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societal
and
etc
the thing named or in question
it
its
etc.
… between countries in all around
world
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the world
which
are reported
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is reported
by
news
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the news
of the media to show
country’s
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the country’s situation
situation
is
progress
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progressing
or regress and difficulty and crisis
situation
in each section that can affect on people’s mind and their life. A good reason to abolish is the activity that people should do in tension
situation
, so if they do not know that what they should do, they will surprise and
this
situation
has more detrimental affection to their
personality
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personal
life and to society. In
this
situation
, people feel more stressful than they know the bad event on the way and they should do something. I should say, think about a volcano will
happening
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happen
, so people should know that they have to leave the city! Or they will be buried. In the other hand, all of us know that there are various problems in each country. Like
this
new virus that came from china and promotion in all around the world and not only
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
affect
produce
effect
on people’s
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
also
has
effect
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an effect
on
country’s economy
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the country’s economy
a country’s economy
and some company closed and some employee lost their job. Sometime there is
solution
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a solution
the solution
to solve the problem but sometime there is not. By the way, they should know to do at least some health protocols.
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