The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction?

I totally agree with
this
opinion. The Internet can never replace face-to-face lessons in school. It will be difficult for both students and teachers. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
First
and foremost, the Internet may work differently everywhere.
For example
, in urban areas the speed of the Internet is high enough.
Thus
, there are not any barriers for students to learn from the net.
However
, internet may not work well in rural areas. Students from
villages
Suggestion
the villages
can not study online.
Moreover
, online lessons can be boring for students. Students may
also
miss some of the lessons from online lessons. Teachers
also
find it difficult to teach online.
Anyway no
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Anyway, no
lesson
is like a face-to-face
lesson
. But even so, teachers are trying to explain it to students quickly and easily.
Although
teachers are able to demonstrate their academic skills but not their social skills.
In addition
, their teachers are trying to make the
lesson
more complex by sending electron lessons and various tests for students to learn. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
that, our teachers taught using modern resources. I think our students were well educated. But no
lesson
can be like a
lesson
in school. The most important thing for students is to acquire knowledge.
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