Some people believe that the only value of films is to entertain. Others say that films should have educational values.

There have always been considerable discussions in terms of the influence of films on people. It is argued by some that the only purpose of

films

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the films

is for entertainment, I believe that films

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bear in itself educational values. There are several reasons why people hold the view that films can only be used for entertaining.

Firstly

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, many people consider watching movies as a recreational activity.

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, on

weekend

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the weekend

weekends

a weekend

many family members gather together and watch some comedies.

This

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is a good way to unwind after a hectic week of working,

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with

additional

this

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also

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provide a sense of intimacy for all the members.

Secondly

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, there are a variety of movie genres and most of which are used for

entertain

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entertaining

purpose

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purpose, such

such

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as comedy, sci-fi, and so on. Despite those arguments described above, I believe that there do exist films that help broadening the knowledge of the audiences on

certain field

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a certain field

certain fields

This

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is perfectly exemplified by the movies based on the real

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history

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historical

events. These films

use

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used

the materials in the past and depict the

history

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event specifically to the audiences. Normally

history

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is often considered as a boring subject and student easily get drowsy during the course.

However

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, movies about

history

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intrigues youngster and makes them become more curious about how the ancestor fought to claim the independence for their country from the foreign invaders. In conclusion, different views are held that films are only used for entertainment, I believe that movies

also

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have a significant value on

education

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educational

purposes.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

252 words

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