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average standart of people's heath is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely believed that people's
health
 will get worse in a few years rather than the present
time
. I completely agree with
this
 statement and
this
 essay will provide my own opinion with the explanations.
First
 and foremost, it is
unideniable
not possible to deny
undeniable
 that the number of people who tends to eat fast foods regularly witnesses a dramatic increase day by day. People think that fast foods preserve them from
time
 consumption and help them get additional
time
 to do some necessary priorities
instead
 of cooking. Except
this
 advantage, people
also
 think that the taste of
this
 meal is extremely delicious compared to reasonable prices.
Secondly
, it is evident that technology is turning to be an indispensable part of people's lives.
Hence
, a number of people who solve problems faced on a daily basis with the updated gadgets are increasing noticeably.
In other words
, people spend much
time
 with their phones or computers and unfortunately,
this
 situation leads people to have a sedentary lifestyle. Take
for instance
, during
pandemia which
Accept comma addition
pandemic, which
pandemic which
 is called
coronavirus
, a multitude of
students
Suggestion
student
 opts to continue their study through distance learning. In
this
 case, they are spending their
time
 in front of their computers and hesitate to go outside.
Last
 but not the least, except all these detrimental matters,
this
 situation
also
 can increase the rate of obesity seamlessly. Taking everything into consideration, I absolutely agree with the opinion of the lower
health
 rate in the future because of
advance
Suggestion
advances
the advance
an advance
 in technology as well as an increase in the sell of fast food. Unless people take any initiatives in order to protect their
health
, the average
standart
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
 of people's
health
 will decrease significantly all over the world.
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