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More and more pollution and wastage is being produced. How common people are affected by pollution. What an individual can do to prevent it.

#pollution #wastage #people
In recent years, the level of
pollution
 is drastically increasing,
additionally
 the massive amount of
waste
 is being produced every year by many manufacturing industries.
This
 process is not only affecting the environment, but
also
 human race. I strongly espouse to the notion;
hence
this
 essay will discuss how can an individual can contribute to averting the condition following a logical conclusion.
First
 and foremost, technology is developing rapidly around the world which simultaneously emerging
waste
.
This
 is an era of development,
n
a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot
in
and
 numbers of manufacturing industries have been set up around the world. Which are
also
 producing
pollution
 and
waste
.
for
Suggestion
For
 example petrochemical industries, metal scrap, plastic
waste
, radioactive
waste
 and so on.
Moreover increasing
Accept comma addition
Moreover, increasing
 number of automobiles
also
 plays the huge role in air
pollution
.
On the other hand
, a plethora of people who lives in both urban and rural areas are getting affected by air
pollution
, water
pollution
 and noise
pollution
, global warming and many more. Common people who are living in the urban area are facing problem of air
pollution
 all the time. According to the survey Delhi is the most polluted country capital around the world. Due to establishment of industries in rural areas a plethora of people is having trouble in utilizing river water because all manufacturing industries dump their
waste
 in rivers. After analysing the argument; in my opinion
,
Accept space
,
planting trees, using public
trassport
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
, recycling plastic and paper are a number of options which individuals can do to prevent
pollution
 and wastage.
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