In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new realway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Today the contemporary world heavily relies on the fastest mode of transport. Many states believe that a huge budget should be set for the construction of the bullet train organization. While some others believe to improve the existing transit system.

This

essay discusses both the above views and reckon the idea of the modern railway system. Many countries around the world do not have a wider Rail structure. The fast and cheap transport has indeed become a basic necessity of the society for saving time and money.

For example

, in USA Amtrak services only links the major stations in New York and Washington, DC, but most of the small cities have to rely on taxi and pre owned cars for reaching miles. Due to heavy traffic during work hours, people leave home before 3 hours.

However

, if all the cities are linked with Amtrak services, it could ease out the problems of commuters who drive hours for a job daily. In fact country like USA can easily afford a major budget in developing Rail chain. Contrary to

this

, many Nations do believe in maintaining the ancient public transportation. No doubt maintaining the earlier one costs less as compared to revamping a totally new network.

For instance

, India has one of the largest railway networks in the world. It is constantly improving the same by electrification and bullet trains.

Moreover

, it emphasizes on improving roads for better bus services. Even the public private partnership is allowed in the road transport services.

This

caters the daily needs of many people.

However

the services are regular and offers a wide range of time span to its population, but the need for speedy transportation always calls up. In conclusion, developing a new railway network is crucial to the development of a nation as better means of transportation offers good opportunities to the mass.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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