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Some people believe school children should be given multiple vacations while others think they should get one long vacation. Discuss advantages for both and give your opinion.

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THE DIAGRAM ELUCIDATES THE DETAILED LIFE CYCLE OF
SALMON
, WHICH IS A LARGE FISH. OVERALL,
SALMON
 GOES THROUGH FOUR MAIN STAGES INITIATES WITH LAYING EGGS IN UPPER RIVER AND CULMINATES IN BECOMING ADULT IN OPEN SEA. IT IS EVIDENT FROM THE DIAGRAM THAT IN THE BEGINNING,
SALMON
 LAY EGGS ON SMALL STONES AND REEDS IN THE UPPER RIVER WHERE WATER MOVES SLOWLY. SALMONS STAY THERE FOR APPROXIMATELY FIVE TO SIX MONTHS AND BECOME FRY WITH A LENGTH OF THREE TO EIGHT CM. NOW, FROM THE UPPER RIVER, FRYS SHIFT TO LOWER RIVER WITH FAST FLOWING WATER. YOUNG SALMONS SURVIVE THERE FOR ALMOST FOUR TO FIVE YEARS. MEANWHILE, THEY BECOME SMOLT HAVING LENGTH OF TWELVE TO FIFTEEN CM. LATER
THEN
, IT IS HIGH TIME FOR FISHES TO EXPLORE THE OPEN SEA AND STROLL THERE FOR UPTO FIVE YEARS. BY
THIS
 TIME, THEY TURN INTO ADULT
SALMON
 WITH A MEASUREMENT OF SEVENTY TO SEVENTY-SIX CM.
THEN
, SALMONS GO BACK AGAIN TO UPPER RIVER WHERE THEY WERE BORN AND LAY EGGS AGAIN to initiate THE PROCESS ONCE AGAIN.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • consistent rhythm
  • recharge
  • improved focus
  • motivation
  • academic stress
  • retention
  • deep learning
  • internships
  • part-time jobs
  • disruption
  • fragmented learning
  • balanced approach
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