It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Some people believe that

punishment

is essential in order to bring up children properly and to teach them the difference between right and wrong behaviours, which I am totally disagree since there are alternative ways to break children bad behaviours. In

this

essay I will explain my reasons and

disscus

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

discusses

some other methods for parents and teachers to break children's bad behaviours. On the one hand, I am completely against

punishment

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

if children experience it

in

Suggestion

at

an early age, they might face many issues in their adulthood.

For instance

, there is a study showing that a high percentage of these children

experienced aggrasive

Accept comma addition

experienced, aggressive

experienced aggressive

behaviours, anxiety and

unconfidence

when they grow up.

Therefore

, these adverse effects should be considered and

punishment

, especially physical

punishment

, should be avoided.

On the other hand

, there are other

approches

move towards

approaches

available for teachers and parents that if they use them,

cildren

a young person of either sex

children

will learn good behaviours spontaneously.

For example

, simply explaining them

reasones

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

and consequences of a bad behaviour could encourage them to avoid wrong decisions, which is called positive

enforcment

the act of enforcing; ensuring observance of or obedience to

enforcement

in psychology.

Thus

, parents should try

this

alternative ways to

decipline

a branch of knowledge

discipline

their children. In conclusion, there are some people claiming that

punishment

is the only option for children to realize the difference between wrong and right;

however

, I am

definitly

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

disagree, and I would recommend the newer ways, which are

associate

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associated

with less consequences.