Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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Scientific
research
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plays an important role in the development of humanity. Some people think that scientific
research
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should be carried out and controlled by
the governments rather than
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governments rather than the
private companies. Personally, I believe that private companies can have a responsibility to carry out
research
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. From one side, scientific
research
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requires a huge amount of money to be conducted which can put pressure on
nation budget
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the nation's budget
nation's budget
(state budget). Government has to pay a lot for citizen’s live
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life
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so if they have to handle scientific
research
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, it will affect some important areas
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as education or health care.
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, private companies can do
research
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which is not carried out by governments (???) (
without
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Without
carrying out by governments). In fact, private companies have an abundance of capital (???)
that
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That
can share the financial with government. From the other side, if scientific
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are carried
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is carried
out and controlled only by private companies, there will be some negative effect.(
affects
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Affects
) Without government control, some private companies can conduct illegal
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related to nuclear weapons or human experiments which cause a serious threat to society.
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, some
research
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done by private companies
do not ensure
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does not ensure
quality that
can affects
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can affect
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effect) the prestige. In short, there are many ways to look at different sides of a matter and there have
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been opposite opinions on
this
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particular topic.
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scientific
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should be carried out by private companies, the government
also
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needs control over these
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research
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researches
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific research
  • carried out
  • controlled
  • governments
  • private companies
  • unbiased
  • prioritize
  • profit
  • public interest
  • allocate resources
  • lucrative
  • collaboration
  • information sharing
  • confidential
  • competitive advantage
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